The Refiner's Fire
By Abraxan
Pretty good fic up to this chapter. But it's Romania, not Rumania. And I live there.
My Brit-picker insisted that's how they spelled it, so that's how I spelled it. Glad you're enjoying the fic!
Abraxan
One small thing I noticed was your use of the term sweaters. I alway thought they were called jumpers across the pond :-)
Well, if there's one there, it's the one my Brit-picker and I missed. Not that I'm going to change it now. This story was published years ago and I'm not changing anything. I hope you're enjoying it.
Abraxan
I've enjoyed the slow movement on H/G. Yet, it must be nice to only have to throw a tantrum & get to do whatever you want as Ginny does at the beginning of the chapter. I find the use of the
Cheering Charm rather unsettling. Yes, it serves a purpose; however, it seems too much like a dangerous panacea to me. I'm glad that it was temporary.
I'm so glad Dobby got saved in the previous chapter by the way. I can see him doing anything for his HarryPotter.
The Cheering Charm was a temporary measure to "help out' - and that's what it did. I'm glad you're enjoying the H/G relationship. And yeah, Dobby will do anything for Harry - he's a great character and I enjoy writing him.
Abraxan
Cute with the magic rocks...
I'm very worried about Snape, even though I've read ToD, I still don't like it when my fave characters are in peril.
Oh, et l'aurors francaise est tres bete! Je suis tres furieux! Il est vraiment faut que je les donnes un enorme coup de leurs tetes!
Hope they make it back without any more problems.
Good chapter.
gunny