The Refiner's Fire

Another great chapter. You're very good in your use of foreign words for spells. They might not be 100% accurate, but who will ever know? I'm certainly not going to stop and look up things like that when I'm in the middle of such an exciting story. Only the most nitpicky would, and we writers just ignore them, right?

Anyway, good job. I like, particularly, that spell Malfoy used on Hermione. Well done.

Thanks a lot!

You write too?  What do you write?

I have people who help me with my foreign words for spells.  I also use them for characters' names at times - you'll see me doing that in "The Time of Destiny" more than in "Refiner's".  Glad you're enjoying it!

Abraxan

Good chapter.

gunny

Just a quick note before the bigger one when I finish the story: Effondrement means collapse but has nothing to do with decomposition... it means collapse in the sense of a building collapsing, or in some cases someone falling.

Effrondrement? Really? Nifty! I learned a new French word. Can't wait to show it off in class. It won't be hard to find a good context. We're studying midieval french poetry. Gruesome junk. So THAT'S what happened at the Shrieking Shack. I had wondered. Fantastic as usual.

I am very glad that Lucius finally got his due. The Elder Crabbe and Goyle shoul have a nice time back in Azkaban. Hermione is better an Harry got hurt again. Still looking forward to how you're going to conclude this saga.