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The Time of Destiny

By Abraxan

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Name: RockBiter
Chapter: Chapter 05 - More Guilt for Harry
Posted On: Sunday 7th September 2008 7:55pm

I tried to review after chapter two, but my browser crashed before I could hit the submit button. You were right. It was a treat. Not exactly taking the Dursleys to Hogwarts, but the next best thing. I love the little touches you put in, like Fred and the muggle girl.

I'm very interested to see where you're going to take this story.

Reply from: Abraxan

Wow, the time stamp on this post shows 3:55 AM!  You were up either very late or very early reading!  I'm glad you're enjoying the story!  And I'm glad you thought what I did ther was  a treat!  It sure was fun to write!

Abraxan

Name: TxA_GunFighter
Chapter: Chapter 05 - More Guilt for Harry
Posted On: Monday 26th May 2008 7:41am

Very good chapter.

gunny

Name: Whitetree-Nimloth
Chapter: Chapter 05 - More Guilt for Harry
Posted On: Wednesday 21st May 2008 4:43am

I don't know where you got your french, but you do need to check it a bit- not that I mind. Doesn't impair the story! But 'Grener' certainely doesn't mean 'scars'. Actually, I can't figure out what it means, and french is my mother language! The name of the battle in France is also off, but never mind. It(s a wonderful story, I haven't finished yet, obviously, but I really enjoy it!

Reply from: Abraxan

LOL!  I don't honestly remember where I got "Grener" - it may be some other language than French, but I did look it up and found it at the time.  It's been years since I wrote the story, so I don't remember where I got the name, sorry.  I'm glad you're enjoying the story!

Abraxan

Name: TxA_GunFighter
Chapter: Chapter 05 - More Guilt for Harry
Posted On: Sunday 11th December 2005 5:30pm

Good one, hope Harry gets healed soon.


gunny

Name: Exarikun
Chapter: Chapter 05 - More Guilt for Harry
Posted On: Monday 28th November 2005 12:10pm

healer litteken, cool. i take it you're aware that litteken is dutch for scar?

Name: Wooster
Chapter: Chapter 05 - More Guilt for Harry
Posted On: Wednesday 23rd November 2005 11:34am

ah. again, a marvelous chapter. poor Harry, sheesh. so much pain he has to go through... you're an artist? nifty! I've only ever been able to doodle silly cartoons and such, i made an entire Quibbler magazine for a Luna Lovegood costume complete with articles and ads once, but that's about as much as I can do. what kind of things do you make (if you don't mind my asking?)

Name: The Resident
Chapter: Chapter 05 - More Guilt for Harry
Posted On: Saturday 12th November 2005 5:49pm

Another well done chapter. I agree; too often doctors get wrapped up in treating the problem and forgetting there is a human attached to the problem (some moreso than others). I have also had a recent experiece with something not healing as well as I would have liked and you've managed to chatch that sense of frustration very well. (And I still miss Casey.) ;-)

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