The Time of Destiny
By Abraxan
I haven't read the next chapter yet, and just want to make an observation.
The merpeople saw someone with hair like Ron's. They didn't necessarily see Ron until he came back to the lake later with Hermione and Hagrid. Minor difference, maybe, but THAT is the kind of thing
authors so love to do do throw curve balls ;)
Now, who do we know who has red hair, is not on good terms with Harry, and isn't all that good at spell casting?
It wasn't Percy - it was Ron. But yeah, that could've been a curve ball - it just wasn't, this time!
Abraxan
There truely are no words this is brilliant!!!!
Very different from the refiner's fire but wonderful none the less.
What was asking in my last5 review was will Harry become a full metamorphmagus? However he now has his alter ego (is that the right word?) James Evans.
I adore the whole chamber of knowledge thing. Especially the library and the tournament was great.
I have nothing to add it is all wonderful and I am distracting you from further writing soI will stop
Happy Christmas!
Good chapter. Kept my interest all the way to the end and left me begging for the next chapter. Keep up the good work.
hey nice story.
well done again. I like what you did with the topic.
awesome chapter. haha, the thought of a furious dobby is intrigueing. i hope dobby gets his way with them. haha. i love your story, keep it up. hopefully dooby will show them what's up.
Very excellent part.
A part with Dobby in it is ALWAYS welcome. I love it.
Keep writing and I hope to see more soon!
Nice update. Harry should have learned by now not to trust everything at face value. Too bad he's too noble for his own good. You should let his inner Slytherin out once in a while.
I do hope those three quasi-deatheaters are gonna be punished severely. Death is too easy for them, and that Liam as well, expulsion is too good for them. Torture would be a good punishment. Or let
the D.A. use them as target practice.
You are so cruel to poor Harry. I think he'd better harken to the words of Mad Eye Moody and practice some "Constant Vigilance!" Seriously though, it's almost funny how Harry keeps getting beat up by the most unlikely people. Voldemort really doesn't even need to try anything, the law of averages will eventually catch up to Harry at this rate.
But it's a rather accurate portrayl if the stories are to be believed. Excellent chapter (Could you put a link to the new chapter in your next alert?)
Catch you later.
You're right (your A/N). You ARE so mean to that boy! But it makes for a great read, that's for sure!
Well, if its fer the greater good, I'm sure Harry won;t mind...too much. Course, I don' wanna be the one ter tell him what yer've don' to him. Come ter think of it, I don' even want ter be around, I think I need to go feed them skrewts. Send me an owl when he quits yellin' at yer.
This reminds me of "Johnny Got His Gun". Unable to move, trapped inside his mind...
Good chapter. It kind of leaves me on edge because I'm wondering what Dobby and Ron are going to do to Liam and the 3 mystery attackers.
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APPROPRIATELY nasty??? That's horrible, though JKR did it as well. I can't remember if you're a confirmed HBP-hater, but Ron's more switched on when unconscious in the Hospital Wing than when he's wide awake and running around. Poor Harry though; I wonder who's going to die when he wakes up? A few predictions: it's not Blaise Zabini, it's not any other seventh-years, it's not DA members. All fairly safe bets; I'd go for some young and impressionable Slytherins using Liam whatsit as bait. Poor kid probably enjoyed being collected by Ron too...
ooooo! thank u! update again!
Very interesting and cool chapter, but darn it he's still ASLEEP! Now I have to wait for the next chapter. Meh. *cries bitterly* What a terrible thing in a long line of terrible things to happen to Harry. I like that Ginny's kisses are what's waking him up...I'm sure she'll continue to administer the treatment long after he's cured to ensure that he doesn't have a relapse.
Tsk tsk poor guy, never gets a moment of calm...
Hum this time Dobby wants blood! will he get it? I mean everyone seems to just be sent to Azkaban then come out as if they were not even there... time for um stronger measures I say!
:-). We will find out in 7 days!
AWESOME CHAPTER!!! can't wait until dumbldroe and everyone goes nuts at the hufflepuff and especially the slytherins an dhope fully let harry have a go at them and then expel them!!!! keep up the great work!!!! when will you be updating next?
This was an exceptional chapter. You put some work in on this one. Great job. I can't wait for the big finish.
Thanks! Yeah, that was a complex chapter to write, but it was a lot of fun, too, trying to figure out how to make everything work the way I wanted it to. Glad you liked it!
Abraxan