Content Harry Potter

The Refiner's Fire
Chapter 23 - Betrayal

By Abraxan

Reviews

Dragnew posted a comment on Tuesday 13th January 2009 1:34pm for Chapter 23 - Betrayal

Another one of your mood-swingy chapters. Fights, break-ups, depression, and treasured childhood memories. And to repeat myself for the umpteenth time, you do a fantastic Remus. The way you've written him really is one of my favourite characters, from fanfiction and Canon.

Abraxan replied:

Awww, thanks!   I really like how Remus evolved in my stories.   He turned into a wonderful father figure, which I expected him to do in canon.   I can't believe JKR made him such a pathetic man in her later books.   Grrr.

Abraxan

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Friday 23rd May 2008 5:00am for Chapter 23 - Betrayal

Good chapter.

gunny

ROBERT_1958 posted a comment on Wednesday 20th February 2008 7:04am for Chapter 23 - Betrayal


In this story Hary has at least 3 girls who realy love him.

I like Harry & Hermione parings. I wish this one was of those.

Abraxan replied:

Yes, he has three girls who really love him, but Hermione, in canon, loves him like a sister, and my characters are based on the canon characters as of the end of OOtP.   I "matured" them from there.   No way would OOtP Harry be interested in Hermione as anything but a best friend.   It was obvious to me early on that JKR had set up Ginny as Harry's love interest, not Hermione, so that's the way I wrote my stories.

Abraxan

Phil Boswell posted a comment on Friday 21st September 2007 1:25am for Chapter 23 - Betrayal

There's something extremely suspicious here—Hermione acting completely our of character, and those scratches—and Harry needs to get over his phobia about the Hospital Wing, given the amount of time he'll probably need to spend there in the future ;-)

Abraxan replied:

heehee - you're right to be suspicious!

Abraxan

Wooster posted a comment on Friday 2nd December 2005 5:26pm for Chapter 23 - Betrayal

Stupid freakin' Hermione...god, that sounds a lot like a review i left for the other story...weird. *twilight zone theme plays mysteriously in background* glad Harry came clean with Ginny, suspicious of weird bump on his back, and seriously ecstatic about the memory thing...so cute, heartwarming, and sweet!

The Resident posted a comment on Friday 11th November 2005 8:01am for Chapter 23 - Betrayal

A really nice ending to the chapter, but I hope Harry gets those scratches looked at soon.