kyoshi posted a comment on Saturday 5th November 2011 9:06pm for Chapter 01 - The Heart of the Problem

You made Harry really wimpy in this story. I enjoy Harry when he has a backbone. Harry is so sensitive in this story, you should call it Mary Jane and Thelma.

RockBiter posted a comment on Sunday 7th September 2008 12:21pm for Chapter 01 - The Heart of the Problem

Wow! You brought this one right out of the gate with a bang. I like that. Much better than a story that drags on for 3 or 4 chapters and nothing happens. Excellent beginning. I know there are a lot of people who want the Dursley's out of the story altogether, but I enjoy the tension they create. I'm waiting for someone to take them to Hogwarts where they can witness, first hand, who Harry really is, but, alas, no one has done it yet.

Abraxan replied:

Oh, are you in for a treat, then!   Keep reading!   I haven't done EXACTLY what you wanted, but it should be an interesting read for you!   I'm glad you're enjoying it!

Abraxan

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Saturday 24th May 2008 4:33pm for Chapter 01 - The Heart of the Problem

Outstanding start.

gunny

ROBERT_1958 posted a comment on Thursday 21st February 2008 12:07pm for Chapter 01 - The Heart of the Problem

Good story.


I hope Harry will recive Excalibur in this story.

Abraxan replied:

Where did you hear about the Excalibur if you're just now reading my stories?   Just curious (I don't remember mentioning them earlier).   Glad you're enjoying it!

Abraxan

bookaholic_au posted a comment on Friday 30th November 2007 5:32pm for Chapter 01 - The Heart of the Problem

Hey,

I'm just reviewing to say how great it must be for you to have that success with "Elegance". I really look forward to your Star Sons book coming out. I hope I'll be able to get my hands on it, (I'm an Aussie, and I doubt they'll be distributed here, so I'll have to look hard on the net). Just wondering, when's the release?

Q. What is EKG (ECG)? I don't recognise either acronym.

Abraxan replied:

An EKG is an electrocardiogram, which is a graph (like a seismograph) showing how your heart is functioning.   "ECG" may be the British abbreviation, I don't 'remember now (it's been literally years since I wrote these fics, and I've written a LOT of stuff since then, so my memory of some things is foggy.)

Thanks for your comments about "Elegance"!   Yes, that was very exciting, and my customer just sent me an award photo (of the group of us and the horse and carriage that won it) which was very sweet of him!   Such nice folks, and they have a truly lovely horse (Nanning 374, the horse portrayed in "Elegance").

"Star Sons" will be available through Amazon.com and Amazon.co.uk.   I think Amazon.co.uk may cover distribution in Australia, but if it doesn't, I'll find a way for you to order it directly from me, no worries! I'll have to figure out the price and shipping for foreign orders, but I do want all my readers to be able to order it!   Thanks for asking!

Abraxan

freckleforce93 posted a comment on Thursday 18th October 2007 9:59am for Chapter 01 - The Heart of the Problem

you are the best dam author ever, i love your stories.

Abraxan replied:

Wow, thanks!!   Stay tuned for another HP story, "Now and Forever" that I'm writing now.   I also have an original novel that will be published soon, "Star Sons: Dawn of the Two," a fantasy I think will appeal to my HP readers.   So you have lots more stories to read coming soon!   Thanks for writing!

Abraxan

Mariposa posted a comment on Thursday 2nd March 2006 3:34am for Chapter 01 - The Heart of the Problem

I so loved Tonks in this chapter! She rocks!!!! Great beginning!

Abraxan replied:

Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it!

Abraxan

Victor1 posted a comment on Tuesday 28th February 2006 7:20am for Chapter 01 - The Heart of the Problem

im so glad that i finally got to start this next story!

great work

btw, what was the movie that harry and the others watched?

thanks for great job

keep it up!

Abraxan replied:

THanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it! As for the film - you mean the one on Merlin? It was no film in particular - I made it up.

Thanks for writing!

Abraxan

Nuala posted a comment on Wednesday 14th December 2005 3:53am for Chapter 01 - The Heart of the Problem

Great story so far! Refiner's Fire was amazing, and I can tell that this one is going to be the same way. Just so you know, some people in America do use ECG and not EKG. I do. The abbreviation for electrocardiogram was originally ECG, but then doctors started to get it confused with EEG, which stands for electroencephalogram, which records electricity in the brain instead of the heart, like the ECG. Say the two out loud to yourself and you'll see what I mean. Anyway, now both ECG and EKG are used in the states, but ECG is starting to become more popular after the popularity of using EKG started to wear out. Just thought you would like to know that. Keep writing the story is great so far.

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Saturday 10th December 2005 6:25pm for Chapter 01 - The Heart of the Problem

Good start.

gunny

Christina C. Keimig posted a comment on Saturday 3rd December 2005 3:06pm for Chapter 01 - The Heart of the Problem

I love your Tonks. She's awesome!

Wooster posted a comment on Monday 21st November 2005 2:56pm for Chapter 01 - The Heart of the Problem

fantastic fanfic! this is really interesting...and good. i haven't read its prequel, i will if i get to confused, but it's so well written i don't think i'll need to just yet. can't wait to read more!

The Resident posted a comment on Saturday 12th November 2005 6:41am for Chapter 01 - The Heart of the Problem

Not too sorry about Vernon. Actually I'm surprised he hasn't had a coronay earlier. I hope that between this and Tonks' 'educational' briefing, that things might improve for both Harry and the Dursleys.