RockBiter posted a comment on Thursday 11th September 2008 3:47pm for Chapter 25 - Everlasting Sleep

This was an exceptional chapter. You put some work in on this one. Great job. I can't wait for the big finish.

Abraxan replied:

Thanks!   Yeah, that was a complex chapter to write, but it was a lot of fun, too, trying to figure out how to make everything work the way I wanted it to.   Glad you liked it!

Abraxan

Crys posted a comment on Friday 7th April 2006 1:05am for Chapter 25 - Everlasting Sleep

I haven't read the next chapter yet, and just want to make an observation.

The merpeople saw someone with hair like Ron's. They didn't necessarily see Ron until he came back to the lake later with Hermione and Hagrid. Minor difference, maybe, but THAT is the kind of thing authors so love to do do throw curve balls ;)

Now, who do we know who has red hair, is not on good terms with Harry, and isn't all that good at spell casting?

Abraxan replied:

It wasn't Percy - it was Ron.   But yeah, that could've been a curve ball - it just wasn't, this time!

Abraxan

Robin Westerly posted a comment on Tuesday 20th December 2005 1:14pm for Chapter 25 - Everlasting Sleep

There truely are no words this is brilliant!!!!
Very different from the refiner's fire but wonderful none the less.
What was asking in my last5 review was will Harry become a full metamorphmagus? However he now has his alter ego (is that the right word?) James Evans.
I adore the whole chamber of knowledge thing. Especially the library and the tournament was great.
I have nothing to add it is all wonderful and I am distracting you from further writing soI will stop
Happy Christmas!

The Resident posted a comment on Saturday 17th December 2005 4:42am for Chapter 25 - Everlasting Sleep

Good chapter. Kept my interest all the way to the end and left me begging for the next chapter. Keep up the good work.

jessiepp posted a comment on Friday 16th December 2005 11:42am for Chapter 25 - Everlasting Sleep

hey nice story.

Bernd Jacobitz posted a comment on Thursday 15th December 2005 9:04am for Chapter 25 - Everlasting Sleep

well done again. I like what you did with the topic.

Aaron1 posted a comment on Thursday 15th December 2005 8:24am for Chapter 25 - Everlasting Sleep

awesome chapter. haha, the thought of a furious dobby is intrigueing. i hope dobby gets his way with them. haha. i love your story, keep it up. hopefully dooby will show them what's up.

Stone Cold posted a comment on Thursday 15th December 2005 1:45am for Chapter 25 - Everlasting Sleep

Very excellent part.

A part with Dobby in it is ALWAYS welcome. I love it.

Keep writing and I hope to see more soon!

m4rk6 posted a comment on Thursday 15th December 2005 1:14am for Chapter 25 - Everlasting Sleep

Nice update. Harry should have learned by now not to trust everything at face value. Too bad he's too noble for his own good. You should let his inner Slytherin out once in a while.
I do hope those three quasi-deatheaters are gonna be punished severely. Death is too easy for them, and that Liam as well, expulsion is too good for them. Torture would be a good punishment. Or let the D.A. use them as target practice.

Shawn Cullipher posted a comment on Wednesday 14th December 2005 9:22pm for Chapter 25 - Everlasting Sleep

You are so cruel to poor Harry. I think he'd better harken to the words of Mad Eye Moody and practice some "Constant Vigilance!" Seriously though, it's almost funny how Harry keeps getting beat up by the most unlikely people. Voldemort really doesn't even need to try anything, the law of averages will eventually catch up to Harry at this rate.

Manatheron posted a comment on Wednesday 14th December 2005 5:14pm for Chapter 25 - Everlasting Sleep

But it's a rather accurate portrayl if the stories are to be believed. Excellent chapter (Could you put a link to the new chapter in your next alert?)

Catch you later.

Christina C. Keimig posted a comment on Wednesday 14th December 2005 4:47pm for Chapter 25 - Everlasting Sleep

You're right (your A/N). You ARE so mean to that boy! But it makes for a great read, that's for sure!

Hagrid posted a comment on Wednesday 14th December 2005 11:59am for Chapter 25 - Everlasting Sleep

Well, if its fer the greater good, I'm sure Harry won;t mind...too much. Course, I don' wanna be the one ter tell him what yer've don' to him. Come ter think of it, I don' even want ter be around, I think I need to go feed them skrewts. Send me an owl when he quits yellin' at yer.

Chthonius posted a comment on Wednesday 14th December 2005 11:10am for Chapter 25 - Everlasting Sleep

This reminds me of "Johnny Got His Gun". Unable to move, trapped inside his mind...

Good chapter. It kind of leaves me on edge because I'm wondering what Dobby and Ron are going to do to Liam and the 3 mystery attackers.

moonstonemystyk posted a comment on Wednesday 14th December 2005 10:19am for Chapter 25 - Everlasting Sleep

another

Machiavelli Jr posted a comment on Wednesday 14th December 2005 9:07am for Chapter 25 - Everlasting Sleep

APPROPRIATELY nasty??? That's horrible, though JKR did it as well. I can't remember if you're a confirmed HBP-hater, but Ron's more switched on when unconscious in the Hospital Wing than when he's wide awake and running around. Poor Harry though; I wonder who's going to die when he wakes up? A few predictions: it's not Blaise Zabini, it's not any other seventh-years, it's not DA members. All fairly safe bets; I'd go for some young and impressionable Slytherins using Liam whatsit as bait. Poor kid probably enjoyed being collected by Ron too...

kittykatluver posted a comment on Wednesday 14th December 2005 9:07am for Chapter 25 - Everlasting Sleep

ooooo! thank u! update again!

Wooster posted a comment on Wednesday 14th December 2005 9:04am for Chapter 25 - Everlasting Sleep

Very interesting and cool chapter, but darn it he's still ASLEEP! Now I have to wait for the next chapter. Meh. *cries bitterly* What a terrible thing in a long line of terrible things to happen to Harry. I like that Ginny's kisses are what's waking him up...I'm sure she'll continue to administer the treatment long after he's cured to ensure that he doesn't have a relapse.

AK posted a comment on Wednesday 14th December 2005 8:22am for Chapter 25 - Everlasting Sleep

Tsk tsk poor guy, never gets a moment of calm...
Hum this time Dobby wants blood! will he get it? I mean everyone seems to just be sent to Azkaban then come out as if they were not even there... time for um stronger measures I say!
:-). We will find out in 7 days!

ridmania posted a comment on Wednesday 14th December 2005 1:06am for Chapter 25 - Everlasting Sleep

AWESOME CHAPTER!!! can't wait until dumbldroe and everyone goes nuts at the hufflepuff and especially the slytherins an dhope fully let harry have a go at them and then expel them!!!! keep up the great work!!!! when will you be updating next?