By Abraxan
Reviews
Aaron1 posted a comment on Thursday 15th December 2005 8:24am
awesome chapter. haha, the thought of a furious dobby is intrigueing. i hope dobby gets his way with them. haha. i love your story, keep it up. hopefully dooby will show them what's up.
Stone Cold posted a comment on Thursday 15th December 2005 1:45am
Very excellent part.
A part with Dobby in it is ALWAYS welcome. I love it.
Keep writing and I hope to see more soon!
m4rk6 posted a comment on Thursday 15th December 2005 1:14am
Nice update. Harry should have learned by now not to trust everything at face value. Too bad he's too noble for his own good. You should let his inner Slytherin out once in a while.
I do hope those three quasi-deatheaters are gonna be punished severely. Death is too easy for them, and that Liam as well, expulsion is too good for them. Torture would be a good punishment. Or let the D.A. use them as target practice.
Shawn Cullipher posted a comment on Wednesday 14th December 2005 9:22pm
You are so cruel to poor Harry. I think he'd better harken to the words of Mad Eye Moody and practice some "Constant Vigilance!" Seriously though, it's almost funny how Harry keeps getting beat up by the most unlikely people. Voldemort really doesn't even need to try anything, the law of averages will eventually catch up to Harry at this rate.
Manatheron posted a comment on Wednesday 14th December 2005 5:14pm
But it's a rather accurate portrayl if the stories are to be believed. Excellent chapter (Could you put a link to the new chapter in your next alert?)
Catch you later.
Christina C. Keimig posted a comment on Wednesday 14th December 2005 4:47pm
You're right (your A/N). You ARE so mean to that boy! But it makes for a great read, that's for sure!
Hagrid posted a comment on Wednesday 14th December 2005 11:59am
Well, if its fer the greater good, I'm sure Harry won;t mind...too much. Course, I don' wanna be the one ter tell him what yer've don' to him. Come ter think of it, I don' even want ter be around, I think I need to go feed them skrewts. Send me an owl when he quits yellin' at yer.
Chthonius posted a comment on Wednesday 14th December 2005 11:10am
This reminds me of "Johnny Got His Gun". Unable to move, trapped inside his mind...
Good chapter. It kind of leaves me on edge because I'm wondering what Dobby and Ron are going to do to Liam and the 3 mystery attackers.
moonstonemystyk posted a comment on Wednesday 14th December 2005 10:19am
another
Machiavelli Jr posted a comment on Wednesday 14th December 2005 9:07am
APPROPRIATELY nasty??? That's horrible, though JKR did it as well. I can't remember if you're a confirmed HBP-hater, but Ron's more switched on when unconscious in the Hospital Wing than when he's wide awake and running around. Poor Harry though; I wonder who's going to die when he wakes up? A few predictions: it's not Blaise Zabini, it's not any other seventh-years, it's not DA members. All fairly safe bets; I'd go for some young and impressionable Slytherins using Liam whatsit as bait. Poor kid probably enjoyed being collected by Ron too...
kittykatluver posted a comment on Wednesday 14th December 2005 9:07am
ooooo! thank u! update again!
Wooster posted a comment on Wednesday 14th December 2005 9:04am
Very interesting and cool chapter, but darn it he's still ASLEEP! Now I have to wait for the next chapter. Meh. *cries bitterly* What a terrible thing in a long line of terrible things to happen to Harry. I like that Ginny's kisses are what's waking him up...I'm sure she'll continue to administer the treatment long after he's cured to ensure that he doesn't have a relapse.
AK posted a comment on Wednesday 14th December 2005 8:22am
Tsk tsk poor guy, never gets a moment of calm...
Hum this time Dobby wants blood! will he get it? I mean everyone seems to just be sent to Azkaban then come out as if they were not even there... time for um stronger measures I say!
:-). We will find out in 7 days!
Nuala posted a comment on Wednesday 14th December 2005 3:53am
Great story so far! Refiner's Fire was amazing, and I can tell that this one is going to be the same way. Just so you know, some people in America do use ECG and not EKG. I do. The abbreviation for electrocardiogram was originally ECG, but then doctors started to get it confused with EEG, which stands for electroencephalogram, which records electricity in the brain instead of the heart, like the ECG. Say the two out loud to yourself and you'll see what I mean. Anyway, now both ECG and EKG are used in the states, but ECG is starting to become more popular after the popularity of using EKG started to wear out. Just thought you would like to know that. Keep writing the story is great so far.
ridmania posted a comment on Wednesday 14th December 2005 1:06am
AWESOME CHAPTER!!! can't wait until dumbldroe and everyone goes nuts at the hufflepuff and especially the slytherins an dhope fully let harry have a go at them and then expel them!!!! keep up the great work!!!! when will you be updating next?
Christopher Estep posted a comment on Wednesday 14th December 2005 12:28am
Whoever did this to Harry screwed up VERY badly at least three different ways. One: they used an untested spell mix. Two: they also used Muggle means. Three: they didn't finish the job. Now, Harry's friends are pissed, the staff is pissed, and the house-elves are pissed. Will somebody accidentally-on-purpose get *killed*? (Dobby seems angry enough to execute one of the guilty parties.)
TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Tuesday 13th December 2005 5:33pm
That was brilliant! Nice stuff and what a twist. Nice writing.
gunny
TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Tuesday 13th December 2005 4:18pm
Getting things lined up for some tail kicking.
gunny
TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Tuesday 13th December 2005 3:11pm
Very good, nicely done.
gunny
Bernd Jacobitz posted a comment on Thursday 15th December 2005 9:04am