TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Tuesday 13th December 2005 12:14pm

That was well done. I had a very close girlfriend that was raped when we were 12, she went through hell getting over it. She couldn't be alone with a guy for months without coming unglued. It was three months before I could hug her, kisses took more time. Every since then I have no good feelings for anyone that will mistreat a girl.

gunny

Machiavelli Jr posted a comment on Tuesday 13th December 2005 5:44am

Nice thing about magical engravers, they get your name right. A proper trophy would say 'Neuille Langbolton, 199S'. A very good idea, the Tournament, though Neville winning it was a bit predictable. Mandy Brocklehurst a good idea; Gryffindor 1-2-3 would have been too cliche and easy. Loved Ron's commentating. KUTGW.

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Monday 12th December 2005 2:50pm

Outstanding, really enjoyed that.

gunny

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Monday 12th December 2005 1:04pm

Very well done. Love this story.

gunny

MarinePotterfan posted a comment on Monday 12th December 2005 9:52am

Great chapter, keep up the great writing. I'm glad that you waited until after the DA tournament was over to send in the dementors. I cant wait to see what happens next.

MPF

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Sunday 11th December 2005 4:30pm

Good one, hope Harry gets healed soon.


gunny

AK posted a comment on Sunday 11th December 2005 2:58pm

Well I have to repeat myself here, your story is intersting and I quite enjoyed myself by reading it (if I fail my math exam tomorrow it's all your fault!!! j/k ).
In this one my favorite parts were: In the summer the part where Harry finally gets to have some sort of closure with his uncle and aunt. I also liked the way you described all the minor skirmishes through out the story. I noticed that the sequel has way less action and is much more introspective. Oh and you use "OK" waayyyyyyy less than in your first story good job (hehehe).
What annoyed me (as a consciencious reviewer I must add this part too) : the repeated random dementor attacs, you have like 5-6 and some just don't seem to add anything to the story (maybe because they are repelled so easily), Draco keeps escaping!!! PLEASE KILL THAT BLOODY FERRET (okay so I don't like him :-) he is way past the 3 offences he should get anyway heh!
Overall as many have probably said before it is really nice to read and I hope you post a new chapter soon. Oh ya! you mentioned that you would be writing publishable work, I'd really like to see that! (Maybe give a preview to your fans!!!)

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Sunday 11th December 2005 2:20pm

Good, should get interesting soon.


gunny

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Sunday 11th December 2005 7:05am

Very good.

gunny

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Saturday 10th December 2005 8:54pm

Outstanding.

gunny

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Saturday 10th December 2005 6:25pm

Good start.

gunny

Monika2 posted a comment on Friday 9th December 2005 7:10am

Please please please writte more!!
This is incredible, I've been reading the whole series and you are great!
More Now!! :)

Wooster posted a comment on Thursday 8th December 2005 2:52pm

Harry kicked some serious Mundungus butt! Sweet. And the tournament was simply amazing. I liked the touch of having the Hogsmeade shops donating stuff. Yep, 'Mr. Honeyduke' is definitely in Refiner's...I'm loving the challenge of keeping my mind straight between the two plots! (Not that I'd do it again...ever.) And Neville! Oh my goodness I'm so THRILLED! I absolutely adore Neville. This was totally cool. Now all we need is for his parents to get better...I wish. He deserves a kajillion happy things to happen to him. Yes. A kajillion. It's a scientific number. ;)

Christina C. Keimig posted a comment on Wednesday 7th December 2005 3:51pm

I love that Neville won. So fitting.
This fic is so amazing (as is Refiner's)! Thanks!!!!

ridmania posted a comment on Wednesday 7th December 2005 2:14pm

awesome!!! loved it!!! how about a mock duel between harry and dumbledore to see how powerful harry is now? wat's happening with malfoy and his goons? harry should kill em. great chapter!!!! keep up the great work!!!

Filodea posted a comment on Wednesday 7th December 2005 11:58am

Hooray for Neville! I was so thrilled when he was the winner. I felt teary at the end when he's reflecting on the fact that his family was finally proud of him. Hooray!

Meg posted a comment on Wednesday 7th December 2005 11:32am

You had me absolutly grinning from ear to ear in this chapter, dementors or no.

Just........awesome. I felt as proud of Neville in this chapter as I have for one of my kids, so that's saying something! :D

Meg

James Benfield posted a comment on Monday 5th December 2005 11:37am

This story is turning out to be just as good, if not better, than its predecessor. The ony thing I didn't like is how much better Harry was after visiting the land of the phoenixes. I agree that something like that would heal you, but I think it may have been a bit to much. Great so far, though. I am sorry for not reviewing each chapter, but time is a problem for me. That, and I didn't reaslize I was at this chapter until there were no more chapter to go. Update soon!

James

The Resident posted a comment on Monday 5th December 2005 9:35am

Another excellent chapter, even though it is more of a transitional piece than anything else. Glad to see Harry is feeling better. Loved the ideas for Draco. -grin- Keep up the good work and I am, as always, looking forward to the next chapter.

kittykatluver posted a comment on Sunday 4th December 2005 9:30am

Hmmm...those eyes in the jar are creeping me out. Seriously. I love this story....maybe not the sex scenes, but I still like the story!! Keep up the good work!